Birthday Spankings

Hey guys, I thought I'd tell you about my 20th birthday last week. My girlfriend of about 3 months took me out for a great dinner and a movie. Then we went to her house which is out in the country, where she had two gifts wrapped up. She told me to unwrap them and I went for the smaller one first where I found a great Kenneth Cole watch, but then she told me to open the second one. I unwrapped it and found a wooded hairbrush, and smiled, wondering whta the hell this was for? THen she told me in a commanding voice that I needed a birtday spanking when she pulled me over her knees and in one motion pulled my jeans and boxers off. She told me how naughty I had been and that she was going to spank me from now on. She spanked me 60 times with the brush and then used a rolled up newspaper on my $%!@, while I had to count each spank. I was bawling after wards and screaming with each spank. She finally stopped, and I was pretty $%!@ed so I left. But now I'm kinda turned on by the idea of being spanked again. Anyways hope you liked the story, and feel free to email me if you want. ENL

I'm afraid I have some real problems with your story. The baring of your bottom was far too abrupt and mechanically ho-hum. Remember, this is AFTER a girl you've known for only three months has told you she intends to spank your bottom! A wonderful set-up for a description of you being positioned and bared - and you race through it like you were runnning to a fire.

The newspaper is a complete zero as a spanking implement, unless you're hiding the fact that you're really a puppy. Uuugh...awful. But the worst part is the fact that you threw this brave girl's initiative back in her face; leaving in a huff because she was feeling good enough about the relationship to trust you with her obvious interest in spanking. Of course, now you say you kind of like the idea. This is going to have to be quite a girl to be able to show that much trust in you again.

Your grade: C- ========== In Reply To ========== Hey guys, I thought I'd tell you about my 20th birthday last week. My girlfriend of about 3 months took me out for a great dinner and a movie. Then we went to her house which is out in the country, where she had two gifts wrapped up. She told me to unwrap them and I went for the smaller one first where I found a great Kenneth Cole watch, but then she told me to open the second one. I unwrapped it and found a wooded hairbrush, and smiled, wondering whta the hell this was for? THen she told me in a commanding voice that I needed a birtday spanking when she pulled me over her knees and in one motion pulled my jeans and boxers off. She told me how naughty I had been and that she was going to spank me from now on. She spanked me 60 times with the brush and then used a rolled up newspaper on my $%!@, while I had to count each spank. I was bawling after wards and screaming with each spank. She finally stopped, and I was pretty $%!@ed so I left. But now I'm kinda turned on by the idea of being spanked again. Anyways hope you liked the story, and feel free to email me if you want. ENL

When boys talk back they get spanked! Deal with it! You should have been crying and apologizing by the time she was done with you. If I had the chance I'd whip for trying to make her look bad on this post.

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